[logback-dev] svn commit: r1195 - logback/trunk/logback-site/src/site/xdocTemplates

[noreply.seb at qos.ch]

Author: seb
Date: Thu Jan 11 13:59:50 2007
New Revision: 1195

Modified:
   logback/trunk/logback-site/src/site/xdocTemplates/setup.xml

Log:
modified several sentences

Modified: logback/trunk/logback-site/src/site/xdocTemplates/setup.xml
==============================================================================
--- logback/trunk/logback-site/src/site/xdocTemplates/setup.xml	(original)
+++ logback/trunk/logback-site/src/site/xdocTemplates/setup.xml	Thu Jan 11 13:59:50 2007
@@ -27,11 +27,9 @@
 
 <p>
 Assuming your current directory is
-<em>$LOGBACK_HOME/logback-examples</em>, where <em>$LOGBACK_HOME</em> is the
-directory you've installed logback, you can launch the first
-sample application,
-<em>chapter1.HelloWord1</em>
-with the command:
+<em>$LOGBACK_HOME/logback-examples</em>, where <em>$LOGBACK_HOME</em> stands
+for the directory where you installed logback, you can launch the first
+sample application, <em>chapter1.HelloWord1</em> with the following command:
 </p>
 
 <div class="source"><pre>java -cp
@@ -44,17 +42,18 @@
 once and for all before running the examples.
 </p>
 <p>The <em>setClasspath.cmd</em> script located in the $LOGBACK_HOME/logback-examples 
-folder will configure the class path for the MS Windows platform. For Unix, the 
-equivalent script is <em>setClasspath.sh</em>.
+folder will configure the class path for the MS Windows platform. For Unix, you can
+use <em>setClasspath.sh</em>.
 </p>
 
-<p>Please remember to adapt the <em>LB_HOME</em> variable for your local environment.</p>
+<p>Please edit the script in order to adapt the <em>LB_HOME</em> variable 
+to match your local environment.</p>
 
 <p>
 Please be aware that many examples will launch java classes along
 with configuration files. To access these files by using
 the same commands as written in the documentation, you will need to
-issue the commands in the <em>$LOGBACK_HOME/logback-examples</em> 
+issue the commands from within the <em>$LOGBACK_HOME/logback-examples</em> 
 directory.
 </p>